Tuesday 28 July 2015

Mark Scrivener Poetry Blog No 63 After the Rain


AFTER THE RAIN

The intention of this poem is mainly lyrical and light although it does illustrate how we tend to wish for dynamic balance- we have tendency to react against excess in anything, even weather. The lines are of four feet, mostly trochees (with a single strong syllable at the end). A few are in iambics instead. Trochee- strong, weak: Dawn is light on puddles on. Iambic: I gaze on clearer, higher sky.




AFTER THE RAIN

Dawn is light on puddles on
new-made site made mud by rain
falling through my dreams and now
grass blades bend and boast white drops.

Soft breeze sways near leafy tops
to a subtle whispering;
over all the sodden world
birds sing in the hope of light.

Through a sky of nascent blue
high wind sends a few faint clouds,
brightly drifting south, gold-brushed
by a sun as yet unseen.

Low, south-eastern banks of grey
offer threat of rain's return.
Tired of all the tears of heaven,
I gaze on clearer, higher sky.

Though I know rain is a needful
gift from changes of the sky,
yet all life must swing towards balance-
after rain we yearn for sun.

From a heart that longs for light
I pray day's star sends heat from high
to sweeten wet, unseasoned spring
and bake this damp world crisp and dry.


2 comments:

  1. I liked this poem and the way it mingles the individual`s needs with those of the rest of nature.

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