Sunday, 3 May 2015

Mark Scrivener Poetry Blog No. 26 Watchers of the Sun


WATCHERS OF THE SUN



This short poem describes a scene that leads to a final line that is an observation but carries some metaphorical sense. Scarecrows are like the "hollow men... headpiece stuffed with straw" of T.S. Eliot's The Hollow Men. Obviously facing the light they cannot see it as they have no sight or even awareness. Yet I feel there is something more about this image but I'm not quite sure what it is.

























                                                        WATCHERS OF THE SUN

Feather clouds are stilled by windless silence.
Within wide distance gathered starlings fly;
As one form weaving, black-pattern the blue sky.

Some contemplative cows mull over grass.
Two sunlit scarecrows, one brown and one of white,
Are staring eyeless towards eye-blinding light.







             







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