Tuesday 5 June 2018

Blog No 191 Autumn Town Two


AUTUMN TOWN (TWO)- seven haiku

Once again on the streets of Lismore NSW. Late May 2018. With "snapshots"from a cheap phone, haiku collected from "moments". The syllable count- 5, 7, 5 is arbitrary in some ways and it has been argued that it allows more words than the original Japanese form. On the other hand it is a discipline that forces brevity and leaves a distinct "form" to each. Writing haiku helps you to look hard at the "everyday."


AUTUMN TOWN (TWO)
seven haiku




ONE

Parking Lot. Great fig,
Branching over cars and trucks,
Embraces autumn.



TWO

Between loud car streams,
Traffic island's tall palms bear
Heavy autumn fruit.




THREE
Upon grey, winged one
Steps with red feet, bright seeing-
Pigeon on May street.



FOUR

Small palm in mall space.
No sun. No rain. Do you know
Autumn is outside?





FIVE

Time reminds. Autumn
Goes to winter, goes to spring.
Shop window of clocks.


SIX

Above autumn street
Clouds drift. White billows on blue
Show wonder formings.





SEVEN

In rocks and plants, big
Goanna rears steel-mesh head,
Says- Don't climb on me.

1 comment:

  1. Matching poetic lines conveying the ideas that best explain the phtographic images so beautifully selected for an effective artistic presentation!

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