AFTER
THE RAIN
The
intention of this poem is mainly lyrical and light although it does
illustrate how we tend to wish for dynamic balance- we have tendency
to react against excess in anything, even weather. The lines are of
four feet, mostly trochees (with a single strong syllable at the
end). A few are in iambics instead. Trochee- strong, weak: Dawn
is light on
puddles
on. Iambic:
I gaze on
clearer,
higher
sky.
AFTER THE RAIN
Dawn
is light on puddles on
new-made
site made mud by rain
falling
through my dreams and now
grass
blades bend and boast white drops.
Soft
breeze sways near leafy tops
to a
subtle whispering;
over
all the sodden world
birds
sing in the hope of light.
Through
a sky of nascent blue
high
wind sends a few faint clouds,
brightly
drifting south, gold-brushed
by a
sun as yet unseen.
Low,
south-eastern banks of grey
offer
threat of rain's return.
Tired
of all the tears of heaven,
I
gaze on clearer, higher sky.
Though
I know rain is a needful
gift
from changes of the sky,
yet
all life must swing towards balance-
after
rain we yearn for sun.
From
a heart that longs for light
I
pray day's star sends heat from high
to
sweeten wet, unseasoned spring
and
bake this damp world crisp and dry.
I liked this poem and the way it mingles the individual`s needs with those of the rest of nature.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comment, Jo Cheers Mark
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