LATE
IN THE NIGHT
One
of the great aspects of living in the country is that you get
impressions from the natural world that are more or less lost or
obscured in the city. On a clear night, for instance, it feels like
you can gaze right into our galaxy- the cloudy light streams of the
milky way. This poem was inspired by another sight - patterns of
cloud over a summer night sky lit by the moon. The metre is composed
of variants on the Choriamb
( STRESSED, unstressed, unstressed, STRESSED). For example - LATE in
the NIGHT.
LATE
IN THE NIGHT
Late
in the night
I
woke, feeling restless.
Outside
the half moon
gleamed
low in the west,
washing
its white light
over
the scattered
clouds
which were patterned
like
the vast ceiling
on
a baroque
dome
dimly spreading
over
pale stars.
Trees
were dark shapes,
silent
and cool.
Hills
were black waves,
still
in their slow
ages-old
flow.
And
the small frogs
chirped
in a chorus,
recalling
brief rain.
Earth
breathed a dewy
breath
as it rested
in
beauty and night,
moon-bathed,
a yin
to
summer-fierce light.
And
faintly a soft breeze
whispered
in passing-
this
is the quiet
blessing
on life.
Moments
of loneliness,
in
silence and loveliness,
with
beauty like music
that
flows through the skin,
are
gifts from All-Spirit
to
the spirit within.
A feast for the senses. Excellent work.
ReplyDeletethanks Michael
ReplyDeleteA real expression of the night
ReplyDeleteBeautifully and emotionally expressed. (Katherine Rawlings)
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