Showing posts with label moon poem dactyl night star dark wind lyrical. Show all posts
Showing posts with label moon poem dactyl night star dark wind lyrical. Show all posts

Wednesday, 24 January 2018

Poetry Blog No 184 Moonset






MOONSET 

 

      In some ways a printed poem can be considered as more than a conveyance of meaning and imagery. It can also (like a written music score) be thought of as a pattern for an acoustic “object”.
     This object can be re-created by recitation or even by quietly reading aloud to oneself.
In this short poem two of the acoustic features (amongst others) are the repetition (or assonance) of the vowel i (as in night) and the stressed, unstressed, unstressed foot in the meter. This is called a dactyl or dactylic foot. (Wild is the wind as it rides with the night) . Although most lines end on a stressed syllable, because the meaning doesn't directly run over to the next line (technically called enjambment) a slight pause before speaking the next line could be felt as two "silent" unstressed syllables.







 
                                    MOONSET

Wild is the wind as it rides with the night;
Wild is the wind as it sets the sky sighing.

Bright's the thin moon as westward it's lying.
Bright is the white-shining chalice of light,
Bearing the circle of earth-light's far shine.

Silent's the sightless, swift passing of time.
Silent is time as it's endlessly flying.

Bright is the moonship on time's ebbing tide;
Bright as it glides beneath dark of earth side;
Smiling good-bye on horizon's black bar-
Leaving the night to wild wind, dark and star.