Tuesday, 24 July 2018

Blog No 193 Winter Day





WINTER DAY 


 
Sometimes another's poem can directly inspire you to one of your own. One winter's day I was trying to translate Rilke's "Autumn Day" (poetry Blog No 160) and was inspired by the oblique way his imagery suggests more than its surface meaning and feeling. So this was a modest effort of own, from my own scenery.




WINTER DAY

A small wind steals pale whispers from the leaves
of many high trees with soft-swaying crowns.
From cloud-free sky the winter shine rains down.

And coated black and white,
some butcher birds seek perches in
a she-oak's green-brown robes to sing
and others take the air's abode with wings
to ride the distances of light.

Walk up a little with noon's sun inclined
to mild, warm beams that soothe the brush of breeze
and draw on you the cloak of lonely ease;
stand in the outward view
and count the hills unclimbed
that vanish in the endless blue.






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