AUTUMN
TOWN (TWO)- seven haiku
Once again on the streets of
Lismore NSW. Late May 2018. With "snapshots"from a cheap
phone, haiku collected from "moments". The syllable count-
5, 7, 5 is arbitrary in some ways and it has been argued that it
allows more words than the original Japanese form. On the other hand
it is a discipline that forces brevity and leaves a distinct "form"
to each. Writing haiku helps you to look hard at the "everyday."
AUTUMN
TOWN (TWO)
seven
haiku
ONE
Parking
Lot. Great fig,
Branching
over cars and trucks,
Embraces
autumn.
TWO
Between
loud car streams,
Traffic
island's tall palms bear
Heavy
autumn fruit.
THREE
Upon
grey, winged one
Steps
with red feet, bright seeing-
Pigeon
on May street.
FOUR
Small
palm in mall space.
No
sun. No rain. Do you know
Autumn
is outside?
FIVE
Time
reminds. Autumn
Goes
to winter, goes to spring.
Shop
window of clocks.
SIX
Above
autumn street
Clouds
drift. White billows on blue
Show
wonder formings.
SEVEN
In
rocks and plants, big
Goanna
rears steel-mesh head,
Says-
Don't climb on me.
Matching poetic lines conveying the ideas that best explain the phtographic images so beautifully selected for an effective artistic presentation!
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