Saturday, 10 March 2018

Poetry Blog No 187 Viewing Evening





VIEWING EVENING 



 

This short piece goes from the "sharp" solidities to the fractal forms to the ethereal dusk to question the "relativities" of perception.

Its form is composed of varied meters "bound together" to some extent by rhymes and half rhymes. Taking "u" to represent unstressed syllables and "/" to represent stressed ones-



u / u / u / u /

u / u / u / u / u

u / u / u / u /

u / u / u / u / u

u / u / u / u /

u / u / u / u /



/ u / u u

/ u / u

/ u /

/ u / u

/ u /



/ u / u / u /

/ u / u / u /



u u / u / u / u

u / u / u / u

u u / u u /

u u / u u /




VIEWING EVENING



Above the sharp solidities

of dark shapes on the eastward vastness,

the box-like shops and fractal trees,

a white moon rides the rising darkness,

last shine of air, where last crows rove,

still hiding stars with rose and mauve.



Viewing evening,

turning from

fading fractions

to the sum-



how that air-sea draws my sight

into musing on life's light.



Oh, ethereal, vast ocean,

wide world of last light's weaving.

is the emptiness full,

is the full only seeming?







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