Thursday, 22 June 2017

Poetry Blog No 177 A Wonder is Faint Dawn


 




A WONDER IS FAINT DAWN

This poem was written originally to celebrate the birth of a friend’s child. It is mainly written in iambic tetrameter - da DUM da DUM da DUM da DUM, for example: A wonder is faint dawn’s first ray. In contrast the concluding last four lines are in iambic trimeter - da DUM da DUM da DUM, that from our infant dawn. The “meaning” is built up from a series of relatively simple, clear images and this sense of clear form is further helped by the precise rhymes.






A WONDER IS FAINT DAWN

A wonder is faint dawn’s first ray
that brings forth fullness of new day.
A wonder is the diamond’s birth
from weight and fire of deep earth:
how smudge of carbon can set free
such strength through form, such brilliancy.

A wonder is the seed that shoots
to first small leaves and tiny roots,
till many seasons on we see
green tower of a forest tree.
A wonder are those awkward things
with fluff for coats and stubs for wings
that grow so soon in feathered might
to eagle’s free, cloud-touching flight.

Yet greater wonder is this sight-
that from our infant dawn
the gem, the tree, the light,
the great, age-spanning flight,
of human life is born.




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