Tuesday, 2 February 2016

Poetry Blog No 120 Lake with Pelican


LAKE WITH PELICAN

The pelican referred to in this poem was an Australian Pelican. They can look a little comical on land or when "braking" with their feet to land on water. However, when gliding on the water or soaring on the wind with their wide wings that show a certain grace.

The Australian pelican (Pelecanus conspicillatus) is a large waterbird of the family Pelecanidae, widespread on the inland and coastal waters of Australia and New Guinea, also in Fiji, parts of Indonesia and as a vagrant in New Zealand. It is a predominantly white bird with black wings and a pink bill. It has been recorded as having the longest bill of any living bird. It mainly eats fish, but will also consume birds and scavenges for scraps. From Wikipedia

The form of the poem is based on an adaptation of the "Chinese Sonnet"- The usual Chinese poem is four lines. The first line contains the initial phrase; the second line, the continuation of that phrase; the third line turns from this subject and begins a new one; and the fourth line brings the first three lines together. Quote from http://deoxy.org/koan/88

The last line reflects on the reflexive nature of creative consciousness- the "reality" of the scene has "given birth" to the poem thus, somehow changing something in reality. 


 




From Wikimedia




LAKE WITH PELICAN

The low sun and a light cool breeze
have spun a shining spell of shifting,
brief sparks on wavelets of the waters.
Two ducks sail on the dusk lagoon.

Between long-leaved and ripple-edged,
green islands of the rustling reeds
a pelican glides peacefully
with a curious, gaunt dignity.

With cautious, crane-like walk a black-beaked spoonbill
sifts shimmering shore shallows for small fish.
Nearby a darting dragonfly
beats four frail wings: a flash of iridescence.

The stately pelican would sail
so sedately through the calmness
were I not watching. Had I not watched
I would not give it praise in words.

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