Saturday, 21 November 2015

Mark Scrivener Poetry Blog 102 Four Haiku (Four Seasons)


FOUR HAIKU (FOUR SEASONS)



"A haiku in English is a very short poem in the English language, following to a greater or lesser extent the form and style of the Japanese haiku. A typical haiku is a three-line observation about a fleeting moment involving nature...a three-line format with 17 syllables arranged in a 5–7–5 pattern or about 10 to 14 syllables, which more nearly approximates the duration of a Japanese haiku with the second line usually the longest." From Wikipedia There are other characteristics associated with the haiku such as the "jump" between the first and second image. However, I think one of the most important things is to try to make each one a workable poem (even if it is only a "moment of zen"). These are in the 5-7-5 pattern.

Butterflies by Chang Lee


one



Now a butterfly,

Flitting white through summer light,

Casts a small shadow.







two



Light-bound in spring night

Around and around the bulb

Orbits a brown moth.







three


Dark needles draped on

Cold, mauve dusk. Above, bright bow.

She-oaks and the moon.







four


Light-grey umbrella

Walking in April showers

On two small child legs.




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