Tuesday, 8 May 2018

Poetry Blog 189 When I Woke


WHEN I WOKE

 

 


In the following short poem you can get a feeling for the anapestic foot. The anapestic foot, so called, in two unstressed (or "short") syllables followed by a stressed (or "long") one. A feeling for this swift "beat" can be experienced by taking two short steps followed by a long one. It can be vocalized as "ta, ta, TUM". In this poem there are four of these feet in each line ( When I woke it was late and in winter in night ). A four-footed line is called a tetrameter so this could be described as being written in anapestic tetrameters.





WHEN I WOKE


When I woke it was late and in winter in night
And in quietness and shadow I felt I was caught
In the sense of another awareness and sight
In the light of the lightless, as secret as thought.

And the dreams from the darkness still rang in my brain
And the clouds wove a blanket that hid star-born light.
And beyond the dim walls there the sound of soft rain
Was the whispering voice of the winter and night.